Nineteen
quietly reusing words
her mother crooned
when in the womb
she sits and whirls.
how thin her wrists
how delicate the skin
that peels over her heartbeat
blipping gently now as it did
last birthday, the one before, the day before
beneath thumbs questing pressure
she is a daughter to her father,
she is inquisitive and at times
a doofus, yes,
but she is kind,
and this is all true.
her hair is a damp blaze
curling about pale shoulders
and dark mooncircles
beneath earthdirt vision.
she sways thinly
but she is no willow
whip, twisting at every calling
no. her great grandfather would have been proud
of solid hips. she is neutral on the matter.
dancing alone, conducting
wind, caressing bark with bare
feet, this is her freedom.
she upturns elbows
to face the storm.














Devious Comments
This poem was my written version of a self-portrait.
It's a very nice self-portrait.
I may have to try that sometime.
Thank you again! It was a fun thing to do, especially on a birthday. I think that it's the only poem where I really tried to incorporate my parents into the idea of the shaping of myself.
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If I had a nickle for every time I blinked, I'd be living on my own island by now.
I love freestyle poetry. It's usually the only kind I write.
I'm glad that you like this poem. Since it's an especially personal one, I doubly appreciate the comment.
I hear that, I have extreme trouble being pleased with my work if it rhymes. Most poetic thoughts don't have structure, ne?
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If I had a nickle for every time I blinked, I'd be living on my own island by now.
Yes. Most poetic thoughts aren't even coherent, but words pop up to attempt to describe the thoughts. It's an interesting process. Making order out of chaos? But not TOO orderly. Then it'd be boring.
*rambles on*
Yeah, that's the fun of it though
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If I had a nickle for every time I blinked, I'd be living on my own island by now.
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If I had a nickle for every time I blinked, I'd be living on my own island by now.
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